请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?（单词要求100左右）谢谢!DearMrSmith,I’mterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’tjoinintheoutingthatyouorganizeforonSundaymorning.Ibrokemyfootye
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请老师帮忙改改英语作文,按高考要求满分25分,应该给几分?（单词要求100左右）谢谢!
DearMrSmith,
I’mterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’tjoinintheoutingthatyouorganizeforonSundaymorning.IbrokemyfootyesterdayafternoonwhenIwasplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsIhavetostayinbedforseveraldaystillitrecovers.Itisagreatpityformetomisssuchagoodchancetospendtimewithyou.Iwouldbeveryhappyifyoucouldgivemeyourkindunderstanding.AndIhopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.
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DearMrSmith,
I’mterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’tjoinintheoutingthatyouwillorganize(一般将来时)onSundaymorning.Ibrokemyfootyesterdayafternoon,whenIwasplayingbasketballwithmyfriends.Iwillhavetostayinbedforseveraldaystillitrecovers.(将来完成时),Itisagreatpityformetomisssuchagoodchancetospendtimewithyou.I(最好不用would,虚拟语气表示不真实的,如果你这里用虚拟语气,别人觉得你很假)willbeveryhappyifyoucouldgivemeyourkindunderstanding.AndIhopeyouwillhaveagood（最好用happy吧,）time.
句子结尾用yoursincerely
lihua(随便写的名字)
这就是高考作文的基本套路了,还有注意断句,标点,不要一个句子写到尾,随时要断句.不然阅卷老师费解,没什么大的语法错误,得18分应该没问题,主要是你结尾没落款写信人的名字.
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